This is a rough draft of the magazine add that I have created. It is only a rough cut and improvements still need to be made. Jack has also created an add so we will be combining ideas to make a better final draft.
Positives:
-Good font
-Shows the CD cover so people know what they will need to look for
-There is a picture that shows who that artist is which is eye catching
-There is sufficient information about when it is coming out
-There are reviews
Negatives:
-The background needs to be a different colour as the white is boring and unlikely to catch the eye
-The star rating looks a bit out of place at the top of the page
-There is a bit to much empty space round the edges
-The writing that says 'SJDJ' productions needs to be moved as at the moment it clashes with the picture
This is the advert that Jack has designed and we will combining it with my image.
Positives:
-Good font that is in the header
-The background is dramatic and stands out, giving it a professional look
-The fading of the image means it fits in with the background
-The lights add emphasis to the photo
-The background image also fits in with where we end the video
Negatives:
-The colour of some of the font makes it hard to read
-The lower half is a bit crowded making it harder to read
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